The Forensic Editor
After editing a conglomerate of nearly thirteen million words, one of the most prominent issues is the redundant use of "my own Whatever" You only need to say it once. It goes with how wordy sentences are formed with useless words. Everything I own is mine. Another is spaces in sentences, so no spaces, folks! Filler words I call conversation words; to be clear and concise, don't use, actually, simply and other such words in most instances.
An excellent way to know what to write is to avoid using three or four words when one or two will suffice. Almost everyone uses the spoken word while transferring thoughts to written prose, and hardly any use different synonyms to keep their writing active and effervescent. Still, I try not to wholly intoxicate readers.
A shocking revelation emerged midway through my O P W/ Other People's Writing study. It used the word "trick" for temptation, which I immediately felt and thought came from the garden when Satan lied to trick Eve into disobeying God.
I've had many conversations asking others if they knew the trick synonym; no one I have asked has known. I asked my younger brother first, and when I told him it was temptation, he laughed and said, "Now you know why the prostitutes call it tricking.
" When Satan tells you something, don't believe him. That something is that it is not wrong to choose your notions instead of God's warning. Contact us today to see how we can help you make lasting Impressions!